Fic:15 minutes ficlet - Uncomfortable (jaemin)

[evangellie.livejournal.com]

Ficlet challenge: 15 minutes - 2) Uncomfortable
jaemin
G
fluff
pointless
dialogue style
281 words




"Hyung."

"Mmm?"

"You are heavy."

"Amnot."

"Yes, you are. I can't feel my body anymore."

"I could help with that."

"Stop making that debauched face. And, yes you could."

"Oh? I can. That's very good to know. I wonder if..."

"By getting off of me. Weren't you sleepy? Your bed is as cozy as me. Even more should I say."

"Don't want to."

"And why is that? I didn't know my bones were more comfortable than a mattress and pillows."

"Well. You know you have gained a little weight since we are in Japan..."

"Now that was a direct invitation to... tickling."

"You wouldn't dare!"

"Try me..."

"I am your Hyung! You have to respect me!"

"You are on my lap. My being the key word. So my rules."




"I annoy you that much?"

"It's not that. And it has nothing to do with the fact you are drooling on my shoulder either. It's just... You look tired. You really should sleep and rest properly. Tomorrow will be a long day."

"I am more comfortable here."

"You are being stubborn."

"Takes one to know one."

"Hyung..."

"Ahh. Damn. Not the puppy eyes. Your win. But I have two conditions. "

"Which are?"

"First wipe that smirk off your face."

"Sore loser."

"And two... sleep with me."



"What?!"

"Like in: cuddle in the same bed and fall asleep. Pervert."

"...why?"

"Why what? Why are you a pervert? Well, there could be multiple explanations but the main would be..."

"Not that! Why do you want me to be so much to become your personal human pillow?"

"Pervert and stupid."

"Hey!"

"Because I love you, Min. As simple as that."

"..."

"That and you are warm. My personal heating."



"Whose bed?"

"I will let you choose if you..."

"I will not carry you!"

"Mind-reader and spoilsport."

"Spoiled brat."

"You know. Finally I prefer choosing the bed. And I choose... mine. My bed, my rules."




"Piggyback or bridal style?"

Comments

[deftonsita.livejournal.com]

CANT BELIEVE YOU HAVE A FIC COMMUNITY AND NEVER TOLD ME!! DDD:!! HOW DARE YOU!?!?!?! DDD:!


*adds*



xD

[deftonsita.livejournal.com]

AND I SAY BRIDAL STYLE!!

[evangellie.livejournal.com]

BUT PIGGYBACK IS CUTE! (and you can molest the carrier. ^_~)

[deftonsita.livejournal.com]

but piggyback is oh-we're-friends while bridal style is soo OH-I'M-SO-IN-LOVE-WHIT-YOU-SO-MUCH-THAT-I'LL-TAKE-YOU-TO-MY-BED-LIKE-THIS-TO-MAKE-SWEET-SWEET-LOVE-TO-YOU!!!

[evangellie.livejournal.com]

*stares at icon* I never get tired of seeing it. *_*

Well. You have a point. But piggyback is still the cutest. *points at all the dramas/animes that have the cute piggyback scene*

[deftonsita.livejournal.com]

*stares at icon* I LIKE YOUR ICON!!


Well... you have a point too...


you have a paid count, make a poll where the people say wich one is better! and then make a fic with the result!! *abusing of evangellie kindess~~* ahahahaha xD

[evangellie.livejournal.com]

I could also write a fic for both icons. :P (But don't distract me! I still have the mpreg one and the amnesia one to finish first!)

[deftonsita.livejournal.com]

YAAAAAY!! YES YOU SHOULD!

(TRUE!! DD:!)

[evangellie.livejournal.com]

But I did, didn't I? In a post, but it's a reeaaaalllly recent one. Sorry?


XD

[deftonsita.livejournal.com]

really???

noo!! you didn't!


*refuses to feel guilty for not reading that* DD:!

[evangellie.livejournal.com]

See! (http://evangellie.livejournal.com/59379.html) See! At the end of the post. XD

[deftonsita.livejournal.com]

>.>...




....




*hides*

[sweettap.livejournal.com]

Wow!. I really like this one. Fluffy, funny and cute. Thanks a lot!

[evangellie.livejournal.com]

I am happy you liked it! ^^

[theresa-lynne.livejournal.com]

This was cute. I can't choose between piggy-back and bridal style. XD I think Jae would pick piggy-back, though. He seems to like those. :P

[evangellie.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I think he would pick piggy-back too. XD

[lil-pinai.livejournal.com]

LOL It's cute. I love only dialogue stories. People say the most amusing things.

And, Changmin, you must know that you may very well be one of the most comfortable people to sleep on. Just to show everyone, I'll find you and sleep on you- *gets glared at by Jae* -when your boyfriend isn't around. ^^;;

So adorable really. Good job.

[evangellie.livejournal.com]

I like writing them (I am not good at describing...).

XDD It's a secret, but in fact, Changmin likes to let people sleep on him. :P

Thanks a lot! ^^

[kratynoi.livejournal.com]

Aww, that was adorable. ^^ I wish I had a personal pillow and heater....that looked like Changmin :D Adding your journal since I love your writing. ^^ Great job.

[kratynoi.livejournal.com]

If that's not a problem of course.

[evangellie.livejournal.com]

It's not a problem at all. It makes me, in fact, happy. So add if you want.^^

[evangellie.livejournal.com]

Thanks. ^^ I wish I had that too. XD

[dreaming-col.livejournal.com]

Cheers for the fluff! Yay! *throws confetti* It was, really, just too cute. *nods*

[evangellie.livejournal.com]

JaeMin is just cute like that when they finish with their angst. Thanks for your comment. ^^

[yumeyana.livejournal.com]

i loved this so much, really. i could just imagine them. and the last lines... LOVE. i vote bridal style. ^^♥

[evangellie.livejournal.com]

That makes me very happy! Thanks a lot! XDD &hearts (btw I love your icon, so cute >_<).

[katzk.livejournal.com]

Bridal style OF COURSE! :D :D :D


Awesome piece!

[evangellie.livejournal.com]

It's noted. :D


Thanks! XD

[cupcakezoo.livejournal.com]

THIS IS SO CUUUUTEE~~~!!!!
lol

XDDDD

[evangellie.livejournal.com]

Thanks! <3

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