ext_25499: aoi yuu (jaemin - horror movie)
[identity profile] evangellie.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] nuagedeau
Ficlet challenge: 15 minutes - 2) Uncomfortable
jaemin
G
fluff
pointless
dialogue style
281 words




"Hyung."

"Mmm?"

"You are heavy."

"Amnot."

"Yes, you are. I can't feel my body anymore."

"I could help with that."

"Stop making that debauched face. And, yes you could."

"Oh? I can. That's very good to know. I wonder if..."

"By getting off of me. Weren't you sleepy? Your bed is as cozy as me. Even more should I say."

"Don't want to."

"And why is that? I didn't know my bones were more comfortable than a mattress and pillows."

"Well. You know you have gained a little weight since we are in Japan..."

"Now that was a direct invitation to... tickling."

"You wouldn't dare!"

"Try me..."

"I am your Hyung! You have to respect me!"

"You are on my lap. My being the key word. So my rules."




"I annoy you that much?"

"It's not that. And it has nothing to do with the fact you are drooling on my shoulder either. It's just... You look tired. You really should sleep and rest properly. Tomorrow will be a long day."

"I am more comfortable here."

"You are being stubborn."

"Takes one to know one."

"Hyung..."

"Ahh. Damn. Not the puppy eyes. Your win. But I have two conditions. "

"Which are?"

"First wipe that smirk off your face."

"Sore loser."

"And two... sleep with me."



"What?!"

"Like in: cuddle in the same bed and fall asleep. Pervert."

"...why?"

"Why what? Why are you a pervert? Well, there could be multiple explanations but the main would be..."

"Not that! Why do you want me to be so much to become your personal human pillow?"

"Pervert and stupid."

"Hey!"

"Because I love you, Min. As simple as that."

"..."

"That and you are warm. My personal heating."



"Whose bed?"

"I will let you choose if you..."

"I will not carry you!"

"Mind-reader and spoilsport."

"Spoiled brat."

"You know. Finally I prefer choosing the bed. And I choose... mine. My bed, my rules."




"Piggyback or bridal style?"


Date: 2007-07-10 06:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deftonsita.livejournal.com
CANT BELIEVE YOU HAVE A FIC COMMUNITY AND NEVER TOLD ME!! DDD:!! HOW DARE YOU!?!?!?! DDD:!


*adds*



xD

Date: 2007-07-10 06:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deftonsita.livejournal.com
AND I SAY BRIDAL STYLE!!

Date: 2007-07-10 06:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deftonsita.livejournal.com
but piggyback is oh-we're-friends while bridal style is soo OH-I'M-SO-IN-LOVE-WHIT-YOU-SO-MUCH-THAT-I'LL-TAKE-YOU-TO-MY-BED-LIKE-THIS-TO-MAKE-SWEET-SWEET-LOVE-TO-YOU!!!

Date: 2007-07-10 07:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deftonsita.livejournal.com
*stares at icon* I LIKE YOUR ICON!!


Well... you have a point too...


you have a paid count, make a poll where the people say wich one is better! and then make a fic with the result!! *abusing of [livejournal.com profile] evangellie kindess~~* ahahahaha xD

Date: 2007-07-10 08:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deftonsita.livejournal.com
YAAAAAY!! YES YOU SHOULD!

(TRUE!! DD:!)

Date: 2007-07-10 06:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deftonsita.livejournal.com
really???

noo!! you didn't!


*refuses to feel guilty for not reading that* DD:!

Date: 2007-07-10 07:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deftonsita.livejournal.com
>.>...




....




*hides*

Date: 2007-07-10 06:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sweettap.livejournal.com
Wow!. I really like this one. Fluffy, funny and cute. Thanks a lot!

Date: 2007-07-10 07:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theresa-lynne.livejournal.com
This was cute. I can't choose between piggy-back and bridal style. XD I think Jae would pick piggy-back, though. He seems to like those. :P

Date: 2007-07-10 09:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lil-pinai.livejournal.com
LOL It's cute. I love only dialogue stories. People say the most amusing things.

And, Changmin, you must know that you may very well be one of the most comfortable people to sleep on. Just to show everyone, I'll find you and sleep on you- *gets glared at by Jae* -when your boyfriend isn't around. ^^;;

So adorable really. Good job.

Date: 2007-07-10 09:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kratynoi.livejournal.com
Aww, that was adorable. ^^ I wish I had a personal pillow and heater....that looked like Changmin :D Adding your journal since I love your writing. ^^ Great job.

Date: 2007-07-10 09:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kratynoi.livejournal.com
If that's not a problem of course.

Date: 2007-07-11 12:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dreaming-col.livejournal.com
Cheers for the fluff! Yay! *throws confetti* It was, really, just too cute. *nods*

Date: 2007-07-11 05:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yumeyana.livejournal.com

i loved this so much, really. i could just imagine them. and the last lines... LOVE. i vote bridal style. ^^♥

Date: 2007-07-11 09:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katzk.livejournal.com
Bridal style OF COURSE! :D :D :D


Awesome piece!

Date: 2007-12-03 04:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cupcakezoo.livejournal.com
THIS IS SO CUUUUTEE~~~!!!!
lol

XDDDD

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