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Ficlet challenge: 15 minutes - 2) Uncomfortable
jaemin
G
fluff
pointless
dialogue style
281 words
"Hyung."
"Mmm?"
"You are heavy."
"Amnot."
"Yes, you are. I can't feel my body anymore."
"I could help with that."
"Stop making that debauched face. And, yes you could."
"Oh? I can. That's very good to know. I wonder if..."
"By getting off of me. Weren't you sleepy? Your bed is as cozy as me. Even more should I say."
"Don't want to."
"And why is that? I didn't know my bones were more comfortable than a mattress and pillows."
"Well. You know you have gained a little weight since we are in Japan..."
"Now that was a direct invitation to... tickling."
"You wouldn't dare!"
"Try me..."
"I am your Hyung! You have to respect me!"
"You are on my lap. My being the key word. So my rules."
"I annoy you that much?"
"It's not that. And it has nothing to do with the fact you are drooling on my shoulder either. It's just... You look tired. You really should sleep and rest properly. Tomorrow will be a long day."
"I am more comfortable here."
"You are being stubborn."
"Takes one to know one."
"Hyung..."
"Ahh. Damn. Not the puppy eyes. Your win. But I have two conditions. "
"Which are?"
"First wipe that smirk off your face."
"Sore loser."
"And two... sleep with me."
"What?!"
"Like in: cuddle in the same bed and fall asleep. Pervert."
"...why?"
"Why what? Why are you a pervert? Well, there could be multiple explanations but the main would be..."
"Not that! Why do you want me to be so much to become your personal human pillow?"
"Pervert and stupid."
"Hey!"
"Because I love you, Min. As simple as that."
"..."
"That and you are warm. My personal heating."
"Whose bed?"
"I will let you choose if you..."
"I will not carry you!"
"Mind-reader and spoilsport."
"Spoiled brat."
"You know. Finally I prefer choosing the bed. And I choose... mine. My bed, my rules."
"Piggyback or bridal style?"
jaemin
G
fluff
pointless
dialogue style
281 words
"Hyung."
"Mmm?"
"You are heavy."
"Amnot."
"Yes, you are. I can't feel my body anymore."
"I could help with that."
"Stop making that debauched face. And, yes you could."
"Oh? I can. That's very good to know. I wonder if..."
"By getting off of me. Weren't you sleepy? Your bed is as cozy as me. Even more should I say."
"Don't want to."
"And why is that? I didn't know my bones were more comfortable than a mattress and pillows."
"Well. You know you have gained a little weight since we are in Japan..."
"Now that was a direct invitation to... tickling."
"You wouldn't dare!"
"Try me..."
"I am your Hyung! You have to respect me!"
"You are on my lap. My being the key word. So my rules."
"I annoy you that much?"
"It's not that. And it has nothing to do with the fact you are drooling on my shoulder either. It's just... You look tired. You really should sleep and rest properly. Tomorrow will be a long day."
"I am more comfortable here."
"You are being stubborn."
"Takes one to know one."
"Hyung..."
"Ahh. Damn. Not the puppy eyes. Your win. But I have two conditions. "
"Which are?"
"First wipe that smirk off your face."
"Sore loser."
"And two... sleep with me."
"What?!"
"Like in: cuddle in the same bed and fall asleep. Pervert."
"...why?"
"Why what? Why are you a pervert? Well, there could be multiple explanations but the main would be..."
"Not that! Why do you want me to be so much to become your personal human pillow?"
"Pervert and stupid."
"Hey!"
"Because I love you, Min. As simple as that."
"..."
"That and you are warm. My personal heating."
"Whose bed?"
"I will let you choose if you..."
"I will not carry you!"
"Mind-reader and spoilsport."
"Spoiled brat."
"You know. Finally I prefer choosing the bed. And I choose... mine. My bed, my rules."
"Piggyback or bridal style?"
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Date: 2007-07-10 06:18 pm (UTC)*adds*
xD
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Date: 2007-07-10 06:19 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-07-10 06:32 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-07-10 06:49 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-07-10 06:55 pm (UTC)Well. You have a point. But piggyback is still the cutest. *points at all the dramas/animes that have the cute piggyback scene*
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Date: 2007-07-10 07:07 pm (UTC)Well... you have a point too...
you have a paid count, make a poll where the people say wich one is better! and then make a fic with the result!! *abusing of
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Date: 2007-07-10 07:55 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-07-10 08:18 pm (UTC)(TRUE!! DD:!)
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Date: 2007-07-10 06:34 pm (UTC)XD
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Date: 2007-07-10 06:46 pm (UTC)noo!! you didn't!
*refuses to feel guilty for not reading that* DD:!
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Date: 2007-07-10 06:51 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-07-10 07:03 pm (UTC)....
*hides*
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Date: 2007-07-10 06:20 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2007-07-10 07:56 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-07-10 09:28 pm (UTC)And, Changmin, you must know that you may very well be one of the most comfortable people to sleep on. Just to show everyone, I'll find you and sleep on you- *gets glared at by Jae* -when your boyfriend isn't around. ^^;;
So adorable really. Good job.
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Date: 2007-07-10 09:37 pm (UTC)XDD It's a secret, but in fact, Changmin likes to let people sleep on him. :P
Thanks a lot! ^^
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Date: 2007-07-11 12:44 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-07-11 11:29 am (UTC)when they finish with their angst. Thanks for your comment. ^^no subject
Date: 2007-07-11 05:44 am (UTC)i loved this so much, really. i could just imagine them. and the last lines... LOVE. i vote bridal style. ^^♥
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Date: 2007-07-11 11:30 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-07-11 09:23 am (UTC)Awesome piece!
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Date: 2007-07-11 11:32 am (UTC)Thanks! XD
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Date: 2007-12-03 04:11 am (UTC)lol
XDDDD
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