Fic:15 minutes ficlet - Happy (jaemin)

[evangellie.livejournal.com]

Ficlet challenge: 15 minutes - 1) Happy
jaemin
PG
angst
pointless
past perfect
173 words
thanks to sharkbait_ha




The happiest and the worst day in Changmin's life happened to be the same. It was the day he had gained a lover and lost his family. The family that had always supported him had turned their back on him.

He had been so hurt -- but strangely not surprised -- that he had stood in the rain for at least 15 minutes. It surely would have been longer if Jaejoong hadn't pulled him inside.

"You will catch a cold."

He had said when he had undressed Changmin. The young man had let Jaejoong dry him, still lost in his thoughts, his head lowered. It had been lifted only because Jaejoong had raised his chin, two fingers under it.

Their eyes had met and the tears that had been concealed by the rain had let themselves known again, running down his cheeks to finish their course in his mouth.

The salty taste had made him close his eyes. Or so he had tried to convince himself, when his Hyung had laid down a sweet kiss on his lips.

Comments

[theresa-lynne.livejournal.com]

Awww. :( So sad. What happened? I'm not sure I get it.

[evangellie.livejournal.com]

Don't mind my first reply, (what was I thinking? Really. ^^;), Changmin's family rejected him because he is homosexual (or some other reasons you like more) and Jaejoong comfort Min and kiss him for the first time.
In the last line, Min wants to believe he closes his eyes because he is still sad and not because he loves Jaejoong.

There. I think it's clearer?

Thanks a lot for your comment. ^^

[theresa-lynne.livejournal.com]

Aww. T_T Still so sad. So Min regrets being homosexual then and feeling for Jaejoong?

Thanks for the clear explanation. It makes it 10x sadder, but still really good.

[evangellie.livejournal.com]

Yeah, because he lost his family because of it but... he still loves Jae. So he is torn? *hugs Min*

You're welcome. Thanks. ^^

[dreaming-col.livejournal.com]

Poor Min! (Why am I having to type that in, like, ALL the comments I'm leaving lately?! Should pro'lly stop reading angst...)

That being said, it was awesome. And I'm glad it at least ended with them both alive and together. Yay for that! *grins*

[evangellie.livejournal.com]

(But angst is good, then you read fluff and it's sweeter. XD)

Aww. Thanks. It was too short to kill them. (OMG I am mean.) XD

[yumeyana.livejournal.com]

awwww... that was just bittersweet. ♥

[evangellie.livejournal.com]

That was the feeling I went for. I am happy you felt that way. &hearts

[onew.livejournal.com]

simple and bittersweet. lovely. :D

[evangellie.livejournal.com]

What I intended for. Thanks. ^___^