and they kiss slow and lazy. slowly and lazily? and they kiss, slow and lazy. (as in the kiss, (and it's) slow and lazy)
It shows I'm not used writing in the present tense with all those missing s..
Aww... Thanks! It felt really weird writing but it was a lot of fun. (I must admit I had a lot of fun when Changmin was watching the dvd and being all what is this. xD) The mystery wasn't supposed to be there at first but the Changmin in my head felt restless so they met. Yeah, Yunho is just doing what he think is right for Changmin and the group; he might really think that Jun has been corrupting his precious (and originally perfectly straight) baby. I'm glad you like the ending. <3
Thanks again, for your comments and your corrections! <3
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Date: 2012-08-16 08:36 am (UTC)slowly and lazily?
and they kiss, slow and lazy. (as in the kiss, (and it's) slow and lazy)
It shows I'm not used writing in the present tense with all those missing s..
Aww... Thanks! It felt really weird writing but it was a lot of fun. (I must admit I had a lot of fun when Changmin was watching the dvd and being all what is this. xD) The mystery wasn't supposed to be there at first but the Changmin in my head felt restless so they met. Yeah, Yunho is just doing what he think is right for Changmin and the group; he might really think that Jun has been corrupting his precious (and originally perfectly straight) baby. I'm glad you like the ending. <3
Thanks again, for your comments and your corrections! <3