I'll try... Should I do cracky or serious tone? Mm...
And, maybe couldn't you mix both. Like Changmin is being used because in exchange they erased something from his memory (but not love in this case, something super serious? I don't know really but murder or something).
The first one may not necessarily be more mature than the second (though I see where you go with Charmed. xDDD I really liked Cole though... My teenage years!), it just depends on the way you write. The first could be written too romantically and sentimentally. You know, erasing a love that made him suffer (it really depends on why the love made him suffer).
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Date: 2011-01-30 09:12 pm (UTC)And, maybe couldn't you mix both. Like Changmin is being used because in exchange they erased something from his memory (but not love in this case, something super serious? I don't know really but murder or something).
The first one may not necessarily be more mature than the second (though I see where you go with Charmed. xDDD I really liked Cole though... My teenage years!), it just depends on the way you write. The first could be written too romantically and sentimentally. You know, erasing a love that made him suffer (it really depends on why the love made him suffer).
Does this help at all? /fails...